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StyleWriter's
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The
most powerful way to edit any document |
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Call
StyleWriter up by clicking a button in your word processor's
toolbar.
StyleWriter displays all your editing problems at
the same time. As you begin editing, StyleWriter offers
intelligent alternatives and sound advice to help
you edit your document into simple, concise, plain
English. With a split screen of StyleWriter and your
word processor, you can go through your document at
your own pace. You can click on any style or usage
problem with your mouse, or click back to your word
processor to edit your text.
StyleWriter
edits any document. Articles, press releases, resumes
and cover letters, technical manuals, speeches, ads,
sales letters, proposals, legal documents, corporate
communications - you name it, StyleWriter can help
edit it. Within seconds of launching, StyleWriter
has analyzed your documents for thousands of style
and English usage issues including:
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English
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Complex
words
Overused words
Jargon/Abstract words
Wordy phrases
Passive verbs
Foreign words
Qualifying words
Confused hyphens
Clichés
Legal words
Long Sentences
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Misused
Words
Confused Words
Hyphenation
Sexist Writing
Common Grammar Slips
Miscellaneous
Preferred Spelling |
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Without
StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have now completed
the majority of
our redrafting work conducted
on an annual basis
for your management
brochure however a
number of
issues still
remain to
be addressed
before it can
be sent for
printing.
I
have been asked
to follow-up
on a number of questions that need to
be answered
by yourself
or your head of public affairs.
I
would be grateful if
you could give this matter your urgent
attention. Should you have any
questions concerning
the information required,
please do not hesitate to contact
me.
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With
StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have completed most of this year's redrafting
work on your corporate management brochure.
However, you need to address some issues
before we print the brochure.
I need to follow up these questions with
you or your head of public affairs.
Please
look at these issues urgently and contact
me if you need more information.
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93
StyleWriter
suggested improvements 17:
6 wordy phrases
· 2 complex words
· 3 business clichés
· 5 passive verbs
· 1 long sentence
· 1 grammar error (by yourself)
1 hyphenation error (follow-up)
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Words:
60
The
StyleWriter recommended redraft is 60
words - 33 percent shorter.
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Full-screen
editing plus your word processor
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StyleWriter's
displays all of its editing advice at once.
You can expand the screen to show a page of your document,
with each problem or issue highlighted. The top of
the screen shows you how to edit your document into
concise, clear English. You can make most changes
by just clicking the blue alternative shown. If you
want to make more extensive changes - and you will
- just click StyleWriter's Edit button and you're
in your familiar word processor with all its advanced
editing features.
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Instant
analysis and ratings of every document |
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StyleWriter's
gives you instant, relevant analysis and scores.
Most other writing aids offer you simplistic readability
formulas. These measure, often inaccurately, your
sentence length and a syllable count to define long
words. There's more to good writing than sentence
length and word length.
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StyleWriter
has three key scores and ratings shown at the bottom
of the program's screen.
1.
The
Style Index - an overall score of the clarity
of your style.
2.
The
Average Sentence Length - an important readability
measure.
3.
The
Passive Index - a measure of the most common
writing problem.
Each score and rating becomes instantly updated as
you edit your document.
When
you edit with StyleWriter, you'll discover that StyleWriter
shortens sentences and strengthens words. Readers
can easily take in and remember your message and as
they find your writing style easy and understandable.
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Fine-tuning
the analysis to your document |
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You
can adapt StyleWriter's analysis and ratings to the
type of document you're drafting.
An advertisement needs to have a punchy, direct writing
style; a manual needs to be clear and simple; a report
can carry more complex ideas. So you can tell StyleWriter
the type of document you're drafting and it will alter
its analysis and ratings to reflect the different
styles expected. For example, you'll get a higher
Style Index and stricter ratings if you tell StyleWriter
you're writing an advertisement rather than a report.
Choose
from 12 writing tasks to fine-tune StyleWriter's analysis.
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See
an instant graph of sentence variety |
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StyleWriter
gives you an instant graph of your sentence variety
so you can see if you're mixing long and short sentences
to add interest to your style. While short
sentences make easy reading, good writing contains
good sentence variety and a readable average sentence
length between 15 to 20 words. The program will even
pop-up a warning if your sentence average drops below
12 words - a sign you're taking the idea of short
sentences too far.
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Use
sentence variety to add interest to your writing style.
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See
a breakdown of your writing problems |
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Identify
your writing habits in every document. The
left-hand side of StyleWriter's Category Summary
Screen shows the style problems in document you're
checking. You'll find this a great way to know if
your style is passive and wordy, abstract or stale.
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Use
StyleWriter's summary of writing issues to identify
your writing habits.
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Add
advice to StyleWriter |
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You
can add advice to StyleWriter to increase the power
and accuracy of the program. The more you
use StyleWriter the more your writing and editing
skills improve. Learning the main techniques of good
editors makes you think like an editor and you'll
soon spot other ways to improve your writing. For
example, suppose you notice you are overusing the
words 'provide', 'involve' and 'undertake',
you simply add them to the program and ask the program
to pop up some relevant advice. It's as easy as using
search and replace on your word processor. But StyleWriter
searches for everything you add and its 35,000 style
and usage patterns check every time you run the program.
Add
any editing advice to StyleWriter
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Delete
any advice that annoys you |
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Deleting
advice from the program is easy.
Anything that annoys you - perhaps because it has
a different industry-specific meaning - you can easily
remove.
Fine-tune
StyleWriter's advice to suit your writing needs.
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Make
context-sensitive exceptions |
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You
can make context-sensitive changes to StyleWriter's
advice to fine-tune it to your own writing needs.
For example, StyleWriter suggests replacing 'purchasing'
with 'buying' to simplify your style. But what
if your job title is 'Purchasing Manager'?.
You can make 'purchasing manager' an exception.
Then every time StyleWriter checks a document it highlights
all occurrences of 'purchasing' unless the
next word is 'manager'.
Fine-tuning
StyleWriter's advice is easy.
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Review
the changes made to the program |
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StyleWriter
records any changes you make to the program so you
can review and even reverse them. Most
users delete or make exceptions to between 10 and
50 of StyleWriter's 35,000 patterns. StyleWriter's
Review Changed Patterns feature lets you view
every change you've made.
Review
your changes to StyleWriter's database.
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Bring
StyleWriter's power to your documents |
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StyleWriter
looks for patterns in language and uses wild cards
to find thousands of variants of problems in writing.
This gives the program immense searching power. StyleWriter
has 35,000 style and English usage checks designed
to reflect patterns in the English language. For example:
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Mr
Jones has reached his
decision and will take
his retirement option next year. |
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Mr
James has decided
to retire
next year. |
Editors
recognise 'reached his decision' and 'take
retirement' as hidden verb - expressions you
can turn from nouns to verbs to improve style, add
action and save words. Because StyleWriter uses wild
cards within its pattern searches, it doesn't matter
if you write 'reached his decision', 'reaching
different decisions' or 'reached my decision'.
StyleWriter finds each variant hidden verb and thousands
of other possible hidden verbs with just a few coded
patterns.
StyleWriter,
by using wild cards to match with patterns editors
spot in text, is the world's most powerful writing
aid.
Bring
the power of StyleWriter to your writing.
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Use
StyleWriter for different writing tasks |
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You
can call up StyleWriter's extensive help screens for
different writing tasks. Perhaps you have to write
a sales letter for the first time. Simply
click on StyleWriter's Writing Tips and you'll
find expert advice. You can also call up this advice
from your word processor's help menu so it's available
when you first draft your document.
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StyleWriter
helps you tackle different writing tasks.
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Use
StyleWriter's help screens for more editing advice |
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If
you want more advice, just click your mouse on the
problem and up pops the relevant help screen with
more editing advice.
For
example, if you've used a grammar checker you'll notice
it stops on passive verbs. But you probably don't
understand why using passive verbs are a problem or
what to do with them. StyleWriter, with its accurate
and comprehensive search for passive verbs, explains
why passive verbs are such a problem and shows you
simple techniques to switch them to the shorter, more
direct active style.
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Look
at this government example. Changing the passive verbs
(shown in red) into active verbs (shown in blue) saves
18 per cent of the words.
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It
was estimated
by the research that half of the states would
adopt the approach, and that savings of up to
$900 million a year would be
made. However, to make sure these savings
are guaranteed
estimates will need to be
recalculated by the Department of Labor
for accuracy.
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The
research estimated
half of the states would adopt
this approach and could save
up to $900 million a year. The Department of Labor
will need to recalculate
this estimate to guarantee
these savings are accurate.
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Switching
passive verbs to active verbs is easy with StyleWriter's
expert editing advice.
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Keep
track of your improved writing skills |
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StyleWriter's
Statistical Archive lets you record the word count,
style index, average sentence length and passive index
of every document.
StyleWriter records your scores when it first checks
the document (the original draft score) and when you
finished editing (the redraft score). The Statistical
Archive lets you measure the improvement you make
to each document. By looking at the original draft
score, you can see how your general writing standard
improves.
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StyleWriter
keeps a record of the writing scores
for every document checked.
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"StyleWriter
is like a crash course in professional editing. It will
not leave one's writing unchanged."
- Computers and the Law |
"Looking
back at the way I used to write press releases I now understand
why
editors didn't bother to publish them. StyleWriter shows
me how to write in the style newspaper and magazine editors
prefer. The result is more free
exposure in the media."
- Chief Executive Officer |
"If
its a style checker you're after we'd plump for StyleWriter.
The rules are simple to understand and it's a it's a doddle
to use."
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What Personal Computer |
"Using
StyleWriter is a real
eye-opener. It gives instant analysis and ratings for
style, sentence length and passive verbs. My style was
consistently rated poor until I started to follow the
program's advice. Now my writing is consistently good
and occasionally the program rates it as excellent."
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Accountant |
"As
I edit, StyleWriter's analysis and ratings of my document
change. There's no better encouragement to edit your draft
than seeing the improvement in your own scores. I now
constantly strive for three excellent ratings."
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University Lecturer |
"I
ran StyleWriter through my technical report. The redraft
was 30 percent shorter, simpler and easier to read and
understand. I'll use StyleWriter on every document now."
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Technical Author |
"StyleWriter
really helped me during my Masters degree with an 81 percent
average. I am sure part of that is due to StyleWriter
making my writing more readable and succinct."
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Student |
"StyleWriter's
the best thing since sliced sandwiches!"
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Journalist
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"I
work as a senior marketing manager at a Fortune 500 company.
StyleWriter showed us we're not very good - no we're dreadful
- at communicating with our customers. Since using StyleWriter,
I've gained the skill of writing clearly. It's like shining
a searchlight through a sea of corporate fog."
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Marketing Executive |
"For
me the best feature is adding to the program. I have dozens
of preferred spellings, alternatives to industry jargon
and words I want to avoid. Adding my advice to the program
means I can check for all my editing issues in seconds."
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Newsletter Editor |
"You
could, for example, add technical words or words used
in your profession. I could imagine the editor of a computer
magazine adding the word 'baud' to remind writers it is
often misused for 'bits per second.'"
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Freelance Journalist |
"Every
lawyer should use this software. I should know - I've
been practising law for 30 years."
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Lawyer |
"In
an ideal world, every technical writer would have a copy
of StyleWriter."
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The Manual |
"StyleWriter
constantly surprises me. Just when I think I've produced
the clearest possible draft, it comes along and points
out a few more ways to improve my style or picks out a
hyphenation or word choice error."
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Subeditor |
"There's
more good advice in StyleWriter's help screens than on
any $200 business writing course. The screens summarize
the key points of the best writing techniques and give
me the confidence to tackle any writing task."
- Training Officer |
"Once
I followed StyleWriter's advice and switched passive verbs
into active verbs, my writing became shorter, clearer
and less ambiguous. StyleWriter's advice on passive verbs
alone is worth the price of the program."
- Government Administrator |
"I'm
from the Wall Street Journal and I need a copy of StyleWriter."
"Do
you want to review the package?"
"No.
I need it for everything I write."
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Press Journalist
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